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Friday, 21 December 2012

Purest Bond. . . A short story :)

One of my stories from Jayesh's Blog

C'mon kids; come down stairs we are getting late for the school. . .
They are twins, a boy and a girl. They got in the car & mom dropped them, and they reached school just 3 minutes earlier, when the gate was supposed to be closed. . .
 A couple of words they shared with mom,, as she wont be able to pick them back today, after the school so they have to manage with the neighbors aunt to come back home.. And finally they kissed their mom and had a good bye!!
They both went in their respective classes, as they were in different sections.

Some hours latter. . . .
                       The bell rang for the break, and he came out to approach her in the play ground, at the place where they use to have their lunch together,daily. Strange.....where is she?? All her friends were out only she was missing in them.
What happened to her??
 Why she is not out today??
There had been times, when he was late to come to play ground but she use to be on time always!!
Where is she....... ohhh GOD???

And many several questions were kicking in his mind,, friends- class teacher, nobody knows where is she??
He ran upstairs in a single breathe, to look her in the class room...and here she is...thank GOD!!
But, what happened??
Her face was red, and it seems to be if she'd cried for a long??

What happened?? He asked while wiping out her tears, kissed her, hugged her to make his sis. alright.... But she continued crying??
Can you please tell me, what is the reason behind your cry??
Somebody broke my water bottle, my brother :( , it was my favorite among all mamma had bought for me. (She loves tweety a lot, and the water bottle had a sticker with the moods of tweety- the cartoon character.)


I'll bring you another one, please don't cry my dolly. I can't see you cry. Though, at times I fight with you but this takes my heart away. Believe me, I'll bring a new water bottle before the day ends.
Promise??
Yes,, I do my lil'sis.
And they had there lunch, and came home latter in the evening. Changed dress & had some snacks and this was the time to play.

Hurreeeeyyyyyy,, He shouted!!
You go my bro.. I'm not feeling well today. I'll stay at home.
Do you really think,, I'll go out with friends while leaving you alone here??

But, my water bottle broke down today :( :( she shouted...
(And tears again busted out from her eyes,, this time louder than before).
 He was successful to make her alright somehow, and took an excuse from her & went out.... and he was back again in a while with a bag, and an appearance of something in it.

He took her hand and said- come with me.....
But where are we going??
That's none of your business... my cutie piee.... Juz come with me....

They locked the house, he took his bicycle out and asked her to sit behind.
Where are we going, brother??
It's a surprise for you, just sit with me and I'll bring your happiness back....
And he started, but they are not moving on the way to playground???

Bhaiyya, we are on the wrong track. The play ground was on the right hand and you took a left.
He didn't answered anything this time, and she can read his mind that something was going on, in it!! 
He stopped in front of a shop, parked his bicycle there.... she was quite, and very surprised. He went inside and she kept following him.

He opened his bag, took his Piggy bank  out and placed it in front of the shopkeeper.
His eyes moved around and locked in a while.... He pointed his finger on the same water bottle, and asked the shopkeeper if he can buy it..with all he had in his piggy bank??
The shopkeeper returned the piggy bank to the boy after taking the amount of water bottle.


He turned around. she was quite still??
He stepped forward and before he could say anything she hugged him tightly.... This time tears have a miracle in them, as some thing magical happened to her.

YOU ARE THE BEST BROTHER SHE SHOUTED LOUDLY...........!!!!!!!!!
(Still holding him tightly.)
I know you've collected all this coins to bring a new toy car, and you sacrificed your happiness to see me smile :) . This was the best thing someone ever did for me.
And she moved a little back to kiss him,, But what she saw was ironical. This time he was crying louder than her and before she could understand anything he said-

I can't see tears in your eyes, you are the best gift GOD had blessed me with. You have shared all my joys & sorrows either it was the first day of school or when mom shouted on me, when we returned home late after playing. You were with me every moment, you are my best friend, my dolly.
And it hurts me a lot when i see you cry. I can do anything to see this cute smile on your face.... :) And she hugged him back again....

And they went back home, with all tears replaced with joy they shared some moments before...

Some Relations can never be replaced........ They get stronger, by the warmth of every time they stay together......

Thank you.... GOD,, that you've blessed me with an elder brother.... & Thank him too..... for every time he supported,, wiped my tears and helped me to bring my smile back.... :)



~NOOPUR~

32 comments:

  1. wow wow wow...
    awesome and immotion full story of one of the lovely relation in the world
    again grand salute....:):):)

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    1. Don't give me that salute... but just respect the girl if you have her...
      Coz its the purest bond...

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    2. unfortunately i don't have...:'(

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    3. beautiful story.

      i am agree with your (Noopur's) words in the above comment to respect the girls always.
      no matter if she is our real sister (or relative) or anyone else.

      keep writing.

      Regards

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    4. That was the main motto to re-post this story on my blog :)

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  2. Very very very sweet story <3
    Brought back my childhood memories!
    Cute post!

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    1. very happy to get this response... and pleasure that i was able to bring those stories back.... :)

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  3. well u said it , some relations get stronger as time goes by always ..

    what a lovely jubley storey :)

    lovely post thanks for sharing :)

    Bikram's

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  4. siblings love is always precious..

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  5. True, precious are these bonds that comes with birth. This made me actually dial my brother's number :)

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    1. Wow... I'm really very happy to listen this from you...
      May GOD bless you and your brother :)

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    2. Me too re landed here :) You got a regular reader herein :)

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  6. loved it a lot...one of the best child stories that i read of late...it's really very magical feeling the bond of a brother and a sister and this was very well expressed with this story...

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    1. It was the main motto wen i was writing this story.... actually I fought with my brother that day... :( That's why my emotions brought magical touch in the story... :)

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  7. Wow.. that was really a sweet story. Loved it to bits!! Brother and sister always share a special bond. I too have a younger sister. Ok, we r not twins but u reminded me of her. :)

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    1. U know what...everyone have replied me this,and I'm really feeling happy...
      Because A blogger lives in the heart of readers...I'm really glad that I brought smile on my reader's face :)

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  8. Yes, some relations can never be replaced.. It was such a cute story. Loved it very much :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Abhinav...I'm glad you did :)

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  9. Such a wonderful feeling of compassion and bonding! Brilliant write...... and thanks very much for visiting my space and leaving me a comment! Truly appreciate.

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    1. Thanks a lot Rakesh....and you deserve the same :)

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  10. hhmm.. really amazing story... liked it the most..It will be one of the favorite story for my life

    Tips Via Blogging

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    1. If it is so...then it would be the best comment on this post!!
      Love to hear that :)

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  11. There's nothing like this relationship :)
    most cute n complex :P

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