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Thursday, 12 July 2012

## I NEED YOU!!!






I can’t wait for a moment now,
I wish to have you any how . . .

Though we are miles apart,
But still so close in my heart . . .

You are the only reason to live,
And all my faithfulness I can give. .

Every day I wait for you,
Please give me a little clue. . .

There are many things to say,
And you are the only way. . .

In my life there is a single wish,
To be yours at any risk. . .

You and only you are the one I need,
And in my eyes you can read. . .

Without you I’m like rust,
And my life is such a worst. . .

I’ll be yours one day,
And will achieve you at any pay. . .

Though I know my efforts are few,,
But the only thing I need is
                      “YOU”!!

~NOOPUR~

41 comments:

  1. This is called the heartfelt dedication!

    our best wishes are always with you and you will surely achieve your desired Target.

    Regards

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  2. @expression
    :D Thanx

    @yashwant ji...
    May ur words come true ;)

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  3. @amit shrivastav ji...
    I guess...ha confidence hi h...

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  4. It is kind of nice poem.. I just felt I could read more.

    Keep it up.

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  5. and here are my wishes that you get your "YOU"....

    beautifully penned....:)

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  6. @almost engineer
    sure...on the next post... :)
    @irfanuddin
    :D thanx for the wishes :)

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  7. This was heart-warming one Noopur!

    Following you..Keep in touch!

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  8. कल 15/07/2012 को आपकी यह बेहतरीन पोस्ट http://nayi-purani-halchal.blogspot.in पर लिंक की जा रही हैं.आपके सुझावों का स्वागत है .
    धन्यवाद!

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  9. @lipsy...
    thanx dear...its my pleasure...

    @yashwant ji..
    dhanyawad mujhe shamil karne k liye...

    @sakshi... thanx dear :)

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  10. That was a sweet weave of words:)

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  11. this is tooooo sweet n lovely :) just the type of posts i love reading <3 hope to read lots more :) n thanku fr dropping in ma blog !!

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  12. Just one word. Super. Loved the words. Read 4 times before commenting.

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  13. @palak
    Hope u'll love the more posts ahead :)

    @priya
    Thanks :)

    @sg
    My pleasure...Nd i didn't knew.. it is That good,that one can read it again again lot many times :)

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  14. Good work Noopur....:):)
    "I can’t wait for a moment now"
    Patience is a virtue to be learnt :p :p :p
    Intezar ka fal meetha :D
    Keep posting :)

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  15. Didn't like the rhyming pattern as much but the central idea of the poem was solid. Good work. You've a good command over your pen. All the best
    rukshanpoems.blogspot.com

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  16. @jay singh
    I guess my post has leaved a great impact on you :P
    ya i knw...Patience is a virtue to be learnt :D
    Thnx 4 stepping in my world...

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  17. Rukshan-ur-rahman
    May be u don't like the rhyming...you can have a look on my previous poems....m sure u'll enjoy them...thnx for the visit....

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  18. @rahul bhatia...
    sorry to respond you late...your comment went in spam...but its all well now :)
    Thnx for visiting...

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  19. Hey noopur.. Nice lines..
    Remindes me of my old days.. When I was in clg.. :-)

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  20. @sahityika
    My pleasure that these lines helped you to remember your past... :)

    @jayesh kothari
    M always with you mere bhai :D

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  21. Nice one :) :) Could relate to it :) :)

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  22. lovely and honest write up :)

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  23. @sm
    Thanx...
    @saumya
    Yup...thnx for comming...
    @tonkow
    :)

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  24. Thanx divya....
    Come again :)

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  25. awesme....waise ye muje phle hi tune cls me suna diya tha.....aaj post dkh kr bhot acha lg rha h........

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  26. @swati...
    Happy that u remember... :)
    @swati shinh
    Thnx dear.....

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