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Sunday, 29 July 2012

A true love story....!!!

Every story has a beginning......
But some stories never have their end... !!!


.... After a long time he saw her again. She gave him the same smile and his eyes was not ready to miss a single look of her..,,the similar big cute eyes with full of joy and inspirations in them. She asked the boy,if he is okay;; and the boy was quite. In a moment she passed away, with the same tease in her heart of loosing a friend... And tears rolled on,, from his eyes wondering the time they've spent together...!!!




It was the time of their college life... The cool life...!!!


The BOY : Mischievous bad boy, with bad image in college among all,, but yet a good friend with good heart for all his colleagues; with whom he always use to enjoy; drinking, smoking ,etc... Often he comes college but never reach up-to his classes, with no worries of result's he just followed the same routine everyday, to which he called ENJOYMENT..!!


One year later. .. .
New batch joined college,, his group use to call juniors and keep interacting with them for having fun. One day, the boy proposed a girl among their juniors again for fun and to what his friends use to call as "SETTING" !!


The GIRL : Naughty, pretty not good in looks..and with beautiful soul. Everyone use to pretend her wrong for her frankness,, but she was the heart of her friends.

                 She took everything serious,, Yet refused!!!

She didn't even realized that this was only for fun. She dealt the matter very friendly and instead of treating the boy harshly, she handled him with her soft heart. . .
The days went on & on, and they became good friends.. The boy really fell in love with the girl this time; and confessed everything in front of her one day.. She was normal and instead of shouting she smiled :-D 
and said : Its OK..be relaxed!!

The girl was comfortable with the friendship but not in the state of being in a relationship with the boy. She had her desires and some different goals for life... Her dream was more precious ,then to be in a relation with the boy.
Love..
Care...
Respect....
& Expectations from the girl went on increasing for the boy,, with everyday passing and this gave birth to fights. One day the boy decided, never to talk again as he thought  the girl is not understanding him. The girl excepted and never explained anything this time. She thought,, if her friendship is strong he'll come back again...

After some months he is back again, with a promise that they'll be friends forever and the boy will not repeat the same thing ever. But his heart was unable to stop beating for her. He was strongly affectionate and ready to do anything for her.
The girl tried to make him understand that their is no future if they'll fall in a relationship because of families., but the boy is not ready to except all this again. He again stopped to talk with her. And this repeated many several times.

3 Years passed away with the same thing again and again, and now the girl decided that if he'll come back again, she'll not treat him friendly. Her self respect was badly hurt and she excepted that she had lost his friend.
One day, her phone rang again. She picked up and the boy say's sorry,, but the girl is not the same friend this time.
He did everything to make her understand but she is not ready to cry with the same tears anymore. After her so many tries the boy is not even ready to leave drinking & smoking and also she realized all the lies,the boy told to make her happy.

She didn't need that false happiness but she was hurt for loosing her best friend.

It's very hard to realize that you are no more important to the person for whom once you were everything. It hurt's a lot when you see someday, that you lost a person who was indeed for you.
The boy realized what he had lost. He himself  knew that his family will not accept his love...but yet he didn't had a control over his heart that beats for her, every day.

.....And she passed away, with the same tease in her heart of loosing a friend... And tears rolled on,, from his eyes wondering the time they've spent together...!!!

Because some stories never have their end... !!!

~Noopur~

46 comments:

  1. kuch hint mili iss story se and I can guess who is the girl in the story :)

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  2. @ jayesh.....
    Thanks for the guess dear....i know you are right :-)

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  3. can sumbdy plz tell me what could be the change in the story.....so that it could have ended happily????

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  4. dere's no happy ending in dis story as some people never change n change is only for those who want,dere is no corrections for some mistakes n at the end girl n boy get remorse only......after few years when they met only tears of joy wid some incomplete dreams,misunderstandings n feeling of remorse mixed in it.But dere heart has same love for eachother .....

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  5. @ Dr. Sneha shrivastav
    you are right dear.....because sometimes leaving the conditions "as it is!!!" is only the option left....by the way thanx for your opinion :-)

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  6. really yr heart touching...... super like

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  7. @ Anand jain
    hmmm...thnk u my frnd...hope you enjoyed it :-)

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  8. although i don't know about the girl and boy in this story but the story was really awesome and full of emotions..
    really heart touching....

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  9. 2nd love story i have ever read which is realy full of emotions great........I think true love stories never get happy ending as u can see from
    past(laila-majnu, heer-rajha, romiyo-juliate)to future("I 2 had a love story").....isn't it..???

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  10. @Anshu tiwari...
    Thnx a lot dear....and I'm happy that my words reached up-to your heart :)

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  11. @ Anand shukla
    I guess u r wrong my dear....b'coz those stories which have strong bonding's and follow on successfully....never ends,, they live on and on happily :)

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  12. Nice lines noopur! Loved the way you put in things under your words..:)

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  13. @ Sakshi singh

    Thanks a lot dear....for loving and appreciating :)
    my pleasure :)

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  14. awesome yaar......
    speech less best love story ever read.....
    one sided love is always dangerous :-)
    but the boy was wrong i suppose..

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  15. @shreyas
    thanks a lot....
    Nd juz wanna say 1 thing,,Nothing is wrong or right in love.......... :)

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  16. so touching...full of emotions ...never read such beautiful love stories in any of the blogs! Nice :)

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    1. @ Garima
      Thanx for giving such a huge complement....its my pleasure dear :)

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  17. Very well written and its a heart touching story.
    true love never die in anyway.


    Regards.

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  18. @yashwant ji....
    hmm...true love never die :)

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  19. Really awesome yarr,
    i hv a clue who is the grl in this story bt don't hv a single clue about the boy.....
    well i wll find it!!!!

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  20. @vinamra
    hahhaha.....so nice of u.... nd all the best :P

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  21. Really affectionating.......awesme yr..........
    superb

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  22. @swati
    Thanx a lot dear :)

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  23. Some people never change. And just for that matter,they lose the happiest things of life!

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  24. @sakshi singh...
    truly said dear :)

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  25. Story should have some more lines to continue..It seems incomplete..But as u said some stories never end..But what i say is "If we make effort,every missunderstanding in love life can be solved". Nothing is impossible..

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    1. May b you didn't understood what I want to convey... but still thanks for your valuable visit here :)

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  26. @ Noopur - I think u want to convey that "sometimes we do not get what we want"? am i right?

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    1. Sometimes...people don't understand ....and take friendship as love... But both are different... and one should understand this :)

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  27. i have the same true story....i understand the situation, the boy was childish....give him a chance

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    1. It is actually not possible... thanx for landing here...

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  28. Perfect Story...same happening with me(but i'm not smoker and drinker ;))...my story reached till mid,when they met after 1 year..same thing happened with us...we met after 10 months...dont know what will be the end of this story.....

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  29. @chetan pawar
    M glad to hear from you,and its a pleasure that you shared your life there on my blog...hope you will visit again and find my blog worth reading and following :)
    And I would pray that your story never ends :)
    Stay blessed :)

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  30. it somehow resembles my own life :'(

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  31. Good narration of the story...loved it!

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  33. Nice One!! Hearttouching.
    Shared it: http://thebackbenchlegend.blogspot.in/2015/07/a-true-love-story.html

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  34. when more readers start to comment on ur story with their views its clear that ur story is indeed very interesting ,emotional and has touched many hearts.emotions of a friend and that of a lover is at times a bit confusing:) each individual has a different perspective about love.True love has no end:) Well written Noopur and thanks for stepping into my blog:))

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  35. Every comment for me is valuable, as it appreciate my writing the the content I post on my blog.
    Thank you so much for your inputs Mr. Adhi Das, it is always valuable.

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